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About Me
- Jenifer (JL)
- I grew up on a dairy farm in St. Francis, Minnesota (it's okay if you don't know where that is). I have one younger brother who I swear is telepathic. I graduated high school in 2001, completed an Associates of Arts degree from Anoka Ramsey in 2004, graduated from the University of Minnesota in 2008 with a B.A. in English and a B.A. in Communication Studies, and am currently in the Masters of Education program at the University of Minnesota. When I grow up, I want to teach high school or college courses in the English / Speech departments.
Hi Jenifer,
ReplyDeleteThe lyrics were very good. Now I wanted to suggest something you might want to do. My professionalism lies in the world of audio productions and video productions.
You laid this down too close to a microphone. You laid this down in a room where the amplification of your voice bounced back at you.
I recommend you relay the audio down in a bigger room that has carpeting in it and it is full of furniture and books. Things that will absorb the audio.
Then when all is quiet, relay it down. Be sure to be a bit further from the microphone. You might test a few words, record them and then put on some earphones and play it back, so you can see how it sounds. I am explaining this because you have a good voice, and certainly read it well, but the feedback caused the vocal to become muffled the way you laid it down, and after all, every word you wrote is magic, and we would like to hear them as clearly as you spoke them.Stay a foot away from the mike and speak just an inch higher than you held it and speak at the same tone as you did before. You might even have a choice of soft jazz in an instrumental you could play in the background NOT too loud. Good luck! Christina
By the way, very well done on all your studies, and congratulations, you have set yourself up to really help create our world today!!!!